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Lonely hearts beat in a symphony
and blood shot eyes are astray.
gazes passing, never lingering,
and faces turn away.

Judging eyes, they're everywhere
As a forbidden love festers.
Scornful looks find every flaw,
But, to this love, they remain unaware.

Their bliss is born of others ignorance
and their joy is in their remarks,
for they know, secretly, what they have,
they can feel it in their lonely hearts.
just something im writing for a thing at school.
this is one of the many poems i have to write.

psst. dont use this. it is mine.
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Writer
The words you've written work very well with the theme. Short and straight to the point. :)
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Animeprincess1990 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback :D
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MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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